My favorite line has got to be "what makes my heart skip like a scratched disk"- great simile.
The "knots, scribbles, labyrinth"- that seems to be the confusing, endless code of DNA, and I love how the one strand, joy, is glowing out. It makes me think of using a ball of read thread to trace my path, find my way out of the "labyrinth."
Also, I immediately pictured this as being written at 10:54 at night, but now I wonder... could it be in the morning?
My favorite line has got to be "what makes my heart skip like a scratched disk"- great simile.
ReplyDeleteThe "knots, scribbles, labyrinth"- that seems to be the confusing, endless code of DNA, and I love how the one strand, joy, is glowing out. It makes me think of using a ball of read thread to trace my path, find my way out of the "labyrinth."
Also, I immediately pictured this as being written at 10:54 at night, but now I wonder... could it be in the morning?